Dream Deep

Hi. ^_^ *pokes David, lol* "Tread softly... Nate'll break out that virtual soap..." :wink:

Ahh... in the mountains bordering Southern Bosnia (Hercegovina) and Croatia. There was this one place in particular we passed while in the mountains on our way to the sea that ...

Happy birthday you goose of a brother! ^_^ _()__()__()__() _::__::__::__:: _::__::__::__:: ----------------- IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Look, you even get

Heh, thanks Rei, for the comments. ^_^ Ah yes, the prologue... it's sort of necessary to explain what the chair is or at least that there is one... it's refered ...

Ah yes...I can just see Shan, ready with some violent exclamtion pausing and saying..."Oh shucks." Hilarious image, joke...but of course, seriously... 0.0 But no, none of the cursing seemed particular

Important Issue in the Chair: I don't swear. Mainly because my parents would kill me if I did. Now - as you have likely noticed - there is some cursing ...

Bravo, my friend, bravo. This was wonderful - but in some places you switched tenses... and in others your description ran together and became confusing. Observe: There once was a ...

:wink: Hehe, don't worry. Nothing bad or over the top. It's just really too hard to explain coherently in a single post. ^_~ Plus I don't really want to. It ...

I'm not going to tell you, but you may rest assured that it ranks within the top five best dreams... But that's all you get to know. ^_~

Dreamy... You make me want to give up any hope of being a writer and go curl up in a corner and WEEP. :shock: Is that... a good thing? Heh... ...

Um, hey, just a really quick comment. This is sort of hard to read as it is... do you think you could go back through and edit in spacing between ...

Imp has good, helpful opinions. ^_~ -I just noticed the change in the dream sequence last night. It may just be nostlalgia, vaguely speaking - I liked it shorter. It ...

Lol, we did that in Washington D.C. We had to go through at 3:00 AM in a huge storm and when they stopped traffic to let us through we ended ...

Muahaha. I know what it says. Worship me. :cool: I think it's really pretty, Kay.I don't really think it's cliched... ^_~ Just sweet.

1. Not a problem, Wiggy. :wink: Take your time. 2. To Imp--> EDITED. Thanks a lot for the crit and the pointing out of the typos. Lol, I do apologize ...